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1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [X] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.
6. [X] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red.
8. [ ] Their eyes change color
9. [X] They have wings.
10.[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
15.[ ] They are pyrokinetic/etc.
16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20.[ ] They are a healer.
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
24.[ ] They ran away from home.
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31.[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39.[ ] They are a psycho.
40.[ ] They have multiple personalities.
41.[X] They are very intelligent.
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49.[ ] Some part of their body glows.
50.[ ] They have a rare/unusual name. (well I never heard of anyone name Brogar but my self, sooo yaah, point for team awesomeness XD)
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. (take away the glasses, scarf, and fedora, you'll get a regular looking pony from the show XD)
65.[X] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.
67.[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[ ] They are very patient.
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (got to always wear a scarf to look awesome XD)
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-
3 points
1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [ ] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
I got a 6
Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [X] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.
6. [X] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red.
8. [ ] Their eyes change color
9. [X] They have wings.
10.[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
15.[ ] They are pyrokinetic/etc.
16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20.[ ] They are a healer.
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
24.[ ] They ran away from home.
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31.[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39.[ ] They are a psycho.
40.[ ] They have multiple personalities.
41.[X] They are very intelligent.
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49.[ ] Some part of their body glows.
50.[ ] They have a rare/unusual name. (well I never heard of anyone name Brogar but my self, sooo yaah, point for team awesomeness XD)
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. (take away the glasses, scarf, and fedora, you'll get a regular looking pony from the show XD)
65.[X] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.
67.[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[ ] They are very patient.
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (got to always wear a scarf to look awesome XD)
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-
3 points
1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [ ] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
I got a 6
Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.
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Stop the hate start the love
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Every one needs to just calm down take a moment breath look in the mirror make a list of what is important to u for everyone that has caring and loving family and friends feel blessed and lucky some people have nothing some were bullied raped sold by there parents for drugs are some other crap i am blessed to have a Father who loves me a Mother who still loves me Brothers and Sisters yes we fight but i know they care all i know is Love is the most important thing so next time you see someone hold the door for them pick them up stop all this hate you want to go home and feel good trust me nothing feels better than helping someone showing them you care hey you never know they might win the lotto and think of the time you carried there Groceries for them are when you gave them 20 bucks to feed there child but like i said you feel better doing nice things
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Devious Journal Entry
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A link to what i have to say about the MLP Steven Universe crap stop the hate start the love shdwpny.tumblr.com/post/114398…
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Devious Journal Entry
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Getting close to my birthday April 16th gonna be 25 getting old
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